Tere maasum se chehre me meri duniyan basti hai

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This blog is dedicated to my son....my first blog...
Parents can very well connect themselves to this...just read from your soul...

Tere maasum se chehre me meri duniyan basti hai
Totli boli me maa sunne ko tarasti hai

Tere aane se badal gayi h meri zindagi
Tere liye manjur hai mujhe kisi ki bhi bandagi
Raat bhar ki gehri nind bhi kam lagti thi..
Kahin bhi aane jaane me freedom lagti thi
Aaj mujhe manjoor h tere liye din raat ka jagna
Teri ek muskaan mil jaye phir takaan ka kya kehna

Tere maasum se chehre me meri duniyan basti hai
Totli boli me maa sunne ko tarasti hai

Man karta hai tujhe dun zindagi jine ki saari khushiyan
Kisi dard ko kabhi tu kar na paaye bayan..
Sikhaun tujhe zindagi jeene k saare sahi saleeke
Gum tujhe kahin door tak chu bhi na sake
Jivan k har raste par rehna tu adig
Na rehna tu kisi baat se anbhigya

Tere maasum se chehre me meri duniyan basti hai
Totli boli me maa sunne ko tarasti hai

Nahi zaruri tera har exam me first aana
Tu bas kisi lambi race me na rehna
Rakhna apni duniyan se alag ek soch
Har paristhiti me tere sath ho sirf sach
Haasil karna zindagi me ek achcha mukaam
Nahi ban k rehna tu koi aam....

Tere maasum se chehre me meri duniyan basti hai
Totli boli me maa sunne ko tarasti hai


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  1. Bidisha17 November 2017 at 00:15

    Awesome :) :)

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  2. Rahul Singh17 November 2017 at 02:06

    Aptly written!! Puja di ... One can easily connect to the emotions which a mother wishes for her child ... Especially the line " nahi jruri hai tera hr exam m first aana " scoring well and clearing the exams is not that important in life... As there's a life waiting after exams ready with new exams... Well written and emotions are aptly knitted in the lines..

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  3. Nidhi17 November 2017 at 17:08

    Very emotional 😊good work..Keep up😊

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  4. Unknown17 November 2017 at 22:49

    Just Awesome !! Perfect blend of rhythm and lovely facts..

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  5. Unknown18 November 2017 at 01:53

    Really very touchy and well written

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  6. saket18 November 2017 at 09:38

    Very emotional and perfectly written poem with exceptional rhyme scheme. Looking forward for more poems in this blog. Keep it up...

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  7. saket18 November 2017 at 09:51

    Awesome :) :) Perfect rhythm & true depiction of mothers love & affection towards her child within few lines. Great..keep it up:)

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  8. Unknown18 November 2017 at 17:48

    Very nice... :)

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  9. Amit19 November 2017 at 09:21

    Sharmaji, tera ye talent toh pata hi nahi Tha.. andar ki kavitri kab jaag gayi.. bahut khoob.. keep going Sharma!! 🤘🤘🙂🙂

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  10. Unknown19 November 2017 at 09:26

    Epitome of love and affection..

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  11. Neha Singh19 November 2017 at 09:28

    Very well written Neha.Its very hard to keep ones child away from the rat race that all of us are running. Dedication to do something different for your child will always come from acknowledging the facts and negatives of the world in which we all live.A different perspective. Like it...keep it up!!!☺

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  12. Neha Sharma19 November 2017 at 09:33

    Thank you all of you :)

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  13. Being Dheeraj19 November 2017 at 10:33

    Nice blog , hope to see more of it , and read a book of your works

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  14. Pranav Kunar19 November 2017 at 21:54

    Excellent. Expressed the feelings of a mother in a nice way.

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  15. Unknown20 November 2017 at 10:13

    true depiction of mothers love & affection towards her child...Great..looking for more like this..

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  16. Rohit Raman20 November 2017 at 18:40

    बहुत ही सरल शब्दों में यह कविता बहुत गहरी बातें कह जाती है। साथ ही साथ, बहुत सारी समसामयिक कविताओं के विपरीत, इसकी पंक्तियाँ तुकबन्द हैं।

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  17. Unknown21 November 2017 at 17:39

    Well written did's !! Each line is meaningful.. keep it up.

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  18. Unknown21 November 2017 at 21:43

    Khub bhalo

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  19. aaa21 November 2017 at 23:49

    Darun laglo

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  20. Ravi23 November 2017 at 21:18

    awsm line written by a mother from heart to his son

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  21. Unknown23 November 2017 at 22:44

    Well written. Keep it up. I never knew this angle of urs.

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  22. Unknown7 December 2017 at 10:31

    Very nice

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  23. Unknown7 December 2017 at 10:31

    Very nice

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  24. shan22 August 2019 at 03:03

    Very well written, gave me goosebumps in the end.

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  25. payel27 July 2021 at 02:44

    Very well

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  26. MUKESH ALLROUNDER8 February 2024 at 17:39

    Very well written and highly connected words.

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