Aastha ya Andhvishwas
While wrapping up through the year 2022 I along with my family thought of thanking God for keeping things well, we went to different places to worship🙏 the poem came out of the experiences..just wanted to share it, if you too felt the same at some point of time please comment and let me know 😊
Aastha ya andhvishwas
Samajhna hai mushkil, jane kaisi h aas,
Jane kis hod me lage hain, hai ye aastha ya andhvishwas
Sabko pahochna h ek din usi upar wale k pas,
Amiri garibi unch neech ka farak hai bakwas,
Phir bhi jane kyun lagi hai itni bhagambhag,
Pujariyon ki ikshayen poori karte karte chahe jeb me lag jaye aag,
Swarg ki sidhiyan chadhna hai zaruri,
Daan chadhawa dakshina me rahe na kasar adhuri
Samajhna hai mushkil, jane kaisi h aas,
Jane kis hod me lage hain, hai ye aastha ya andhvishwas
Isi aastha se jane kitne choolhe jalte hain,
Humare hi jitni shraddha kya wo bhi rakhte hain??
Loot k vyapar me sabka bol bala hai,
Aaj bhi unhi logon ne jane kitnon ko loot daala h
Galti humari faida unka ye keh sakte hain
Par ye na kar k bhi kya hum reh sakte hain,
Mandir gaye phool aur dakshina bhi nahi chadhaya,
Yahi sanskar kya humare purwajon ne sikhaya,
Jane kitne sawal aur jawab chalte rahenge,
Agyan aur moh maya se hum bhi dhake rahenge,
Samajhna hai mushkil, jaane kaisi h aas,
Jane kis hod me lage hain, hai ye aastha ya andhvishwas
I really enjoyed reading this poem..The imagery is striking and I am able to connect with real life..Keep writing ...
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DeleteAwesome poem as always...Keep up the good work proud of you :)
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DeleteThe line on temple economy and pandit ji seems apt and it reminds that "हर कोई भगवान देखने के लिए धार्मिक नहीं होता, कुछ लोग परिवार देखने के लिए भी धार्मिक होते हैं ।"
ReplyDeleteNicely written 😊
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ReplyDeleteYour poem depicts the scenarios I usually come across. Many PPL prefer tantric over professional doctors n make their condition even worse..pity but truth! This poem can be an eyeopener🙏😊
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